I’m studying this deep point of view thing as I’m working on my first novel, and it’s really improved my writing. When I go through my manuscript post first draft and do an editing sweep, I will be sure to add deep narrative where needed.
Here are a few articles with examples that I found helpful:
- Deep Point of View by Rebecca Zanetti
Writing Help: Four Tips For Writing Deep Point Of View by Michelle Massaro
- Deep POV—What’s So Deep About It by Beth Hill
I do hope you find the study of deep POV as helpful as I did. With a little practice and tweaking, you’ll soon get a feel for when to best employ this tactic to get your readers into the skin of your beloved characters.